Sunday, 16 May 2010

Last Lesson

Here’s this week’s Saturday Census from Jenny – she has decided to let Mr Jenny compose the opening paragraph which is in italics below  - I’m enjoying this so far and I’d like to thank you all for your comments last week asking for more! I’m not sure that I could do that – would probably need research and stuff!

The small Cessna 172 picked up speed as it roared down the runway, Sara at the controls, the flight instructor beside her.

She knew that she had a very precious cargo to deliver. This was her last accompanied lesson before she got her wings and theirs was the only plane available to make this urgent delivery. Sara took a deep breath and full control of the plane. It was only a short hop to the island but she had never made such an important journey before. Twenty minutes later she safely landed and handed over the red box labelled ‘Human Tissue’. One last tick from the instructor meant that she was a fully fledged pilot.

17 comments:

  1. very well done! I couldn't have done better myself.

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  2. absolutely beautifully written...
    this is my favorite Centus yet...
    Mine is here
    Happy Sunday!
    hugs
    shakira

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  3. Oh yes! I liked the way you created this piece. Glad it was a happy ending too!

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  4. Really nicely done Heather! I haven't had a chance to participate in this one yet and I'm just itching to. Hopefully by June things will become more manageable. This was a great entry! Kathy

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  5. Beautifully done.

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  6. Very nice story there, very imaginative :)

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  7. That was so brilliantly doen well done

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  8. Oh, I liked this! Nicely done!

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  9. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant! Bravo for you!

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  10. I really enjoyed this. Totally different angle than anyone else's. Great job.

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  11. I liked this one a lot. Good work! You can visit me here

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  12. Nice way to earn her wings!

    =)

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  13. Hi, thanks for the comments on my new blog and the welcome to the blogosphere.
    Jenny

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  14. Very nice! I enjoyed the surprise ending!

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  15. Good for her...and you!

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  16. Oh wow! That is precious cargo! I would have been too nervous to do anything right... great job! :)

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