tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post1747571948422401425..comments2023-10-03T12:57:21.567+01:00Comments on Random Ramblings: The beginningeasternsparklehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17655745434901079268noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-48045111127857320962010-07-13T12:29:30.257+01:002010-07-13T12:29:30.257+01:00You made my heart go pitter pat!You made my heart go pitter pat!People Who Know Me Would Say:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04621641188403948733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-53027570417433990112010-07-12T13:23:03.981+01:002010-07-12T13:23:03.981+01:00Like so many others, I like you writing. It's...Like so many others, I like you writing. It's smooth and slides us seamlessly through the story. And what a story! Who would have guessed. Thanks for this one.<br /><br />..........cj Schlottmancj Schlottmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18217936774632262633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-35498459786723426422010-07-11T17:42:54.255+01:002010-07-11T17:42:54.255+01:00Beautiful job on this! I was very impressed with ...Beautiful job on this! I was very impressed with your writing. Very vivid imagery and you nailed the genre perfectly. Well done.Tgoettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-67502105418071700072010-07-11T17:08:11.262+01:002010-07-11T17:08:11.262+01:00Oh, this was very good. Can't wait until next...Oh, this was very good. Can't wait until next week. Great job.Vikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-38950939944436904272010-07-11T04:15:52.111+01:002010-07-11T04:15:52.111+01:00Oh, the tales we weave....
Good one!Oh, the tales we weave....<br /><br />Good one!Vicki/Jakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11388688356180736777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-67775328971091259802010-07-11T01:13:41.761+01:002010-07-11T01:13:41.761+01:00Ooooh. A smooth talker. And you used one of my mos...Ooooh. A smooth talker. And you used one of my most very favorite words: cacophony! Love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01169693305157071792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-73442956846884402212010-07-10T22:25:37.258+01:002010-07-10T22:25:37.258+01:00Nice spin! I liked the velvet voice!Nice spin! I liked the velvet voice!Terrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112479764398508654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-46677442016454569792010-07-10T21:53:17.946+01:002010-07-10T21:53:17.946+01:00OooOOo... great twist at the end! Who needs that ...OooOOo... great twist at the end! Who needs that velvety guy, anyway? :)Samihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01277456797902827017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-21265794459394272292010-07-10T21:14:15.586+01:002010-07-10T21:14:15.586+01:00I'm really enjoying the prompt this week, your...I'm really enjoying the prompt this week, yours included.<br /><br />Nice job!<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-10037234474727004732010-07-10T19:20:43.376+01:002010-07-10T19:20:43.376+01:00A nice job with the prompt.A nice job with the prompt.Bookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-32305983436959640082010-07-10T18:56:28.532+01:002010-07-10T18:56:28.532+01:00Well done. Funny, I put a kid in mine, too. Grea...Well done. Funny, I put a kid in mine, too. Great minds...Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-75760897638899246322010-07-10T18:50:19.225+01:002010-07-10T18:50:19.225+01:00Really nicely done Heather! Beautiful twist at the...Really nicely done Heather! Beautiful twist at the end. You could definitely turn this into a great short story. Romance, yes, but not cheesy:) KatKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-78791360935761740162010-07-10T18:48:10.571+01:002010-07-10T18:48:10.571+01:00Is there something you haven't told me?Is there something you haven't told me?jaydubblahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03405445899546433852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-87551035261119484922010-07-10T18:17:23.097+01:002010-07-10T18:17:23.097+01:00You surprised me! I was all into the "The v...You surprised me! I was all into the "The voice was velvet perfection" and you threw a little kid into the mix.<br /><br />Really clever. Loved your writing here. <br /><br />What a fun week of interesting and funny stories.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-83695456532838324272010-07-10T17:59:02.165+01:002010-07-10T17:59:02.165+01:00ES, I can't believe you actually wrote a real ...ES, I can't believe you actually wrote a real honest-to-god romance style story. Nice and delicately done.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843459906469325667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1625694064530872093.post-33898861682096831072010-07-10T17:49:36.072+01:002010-07-10T17:49:36.072+01:00Wow! A great twist to the prompt. Full of passion ...Wow! A great twist to the prompt. Full of passion but such an ending!!jfb57https://www.blogger.com/profile/17876700842985406565noreply@blogger.com